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31 October 2007 @ 10:36 pm
Challenge Fic: Contractual Obligations. John/Rodney. NC-17.  
Title: Contractual Obligations
Author: velocitygrass
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Kissing after rimming.
Summary: "Get a condom for Rodney and something to prepare John," he heard the director's voice coming from somewhere. He slowly looked up and it suddenly dawned on him what that meant.
Note: Written for the bottom_john Rivals Challenge, specifically the Porn Star Rivals idea. For some reason this turned out less Rivals and more Rodney rescues John from his plight Harlequin. Only with more sex. Many thanks to neevebrody for doing latest minute beta duties. I don't deserve you.

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Know when to walk away: teylabriar_pipe on November 2nd, 2007 06:24 am (UTC)
Omg! *dies*

I love how John started off feeling threatened and ended up feeling cherished. Normally I'd protest "I don't have this kink!" except when it's this well-written, I clearly do.
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:59 pm (UTC)
Cherished... I like how you put that. And it's so true. He (the person, not the nine and a half inches with a body attached) means nothing to those people around him, but to Rodney he's everything.

Thank you very much!
sgafan33: SuspicionJohnRodneysgafan33 on November 2nd, 2007 08:55 pm (UTC)
Guh! That was hot! I love how you started with the mechanics of making the movie and then how John's mind turned into a puddle of goo. Like my mind did.

What I would love to read now is the story from Rodney's POV, the fanboy view. It could start off with a discussion of all the different techniques John uses and Rodney asking how John thought up that particular trademark move and then it goes into some demonstations and...

Whew, let me read your fic again!
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 03:01 pm (UTC)
Yes, I'm pretty sure, when Rodney takes John home, there'll be lots of demonstrations. Rodney will know all of John's performances by heart and make John re-enact them with him :)

Thank you!
Sarah_Thunderstormsarahthebloody on November 3rd, 2007 04:59 am (UTC)
Well well. I don't know if I can say anything that have not been said already. This fic is all kinds of hot. I usually have huge problems reading about rimming but here it's just... *everything* in this fic works. The rimming is even hot! It is indeed a wonderful fic. So thank you for sharing this with the rest of the world :)
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 03:02 pm (UTC)
Wow, thank you, I'm glad that even those things worked for you that are otherwise problematic for you.

I'm always happy to share with the world. John/Rodney love should always be shared. There can never be enough of it going around :)
Nora Charlesnora_charles on November 3rd, 2007 12:25 pm (UTC)
What a wonderful fic! All the goodness of "aliens made them do it" with none of the icky non-con.
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 03:05 pm (UTC)
Now that I think about it, you're right. It is like "Aliens Made Them Do It".

Thank you!
Lenore: SGA: Rodney Hearts Johnscribblinlenore on November 4th, 2007 10:24 pm (UTC)
Holy moly that's hot! ::loves::
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on December 5th, 2007 09:24 am (UTC)
Thanks so much :)
Roxy Palaceroxy_palace on November 8th, 2007 11:08 pm (UTC)
You have killed me with *guh*.

That was so hot it melted my head.
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on December 5th, 2007 09:26 am (UTC)
Yay, I'm glad the hotness worked and it was meltworthy :)

Thank you!
melaganmelagan on November 11th, 2007 05:41 pm (UTC)
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on December 5th, 2007 09:26 am (UTC)
Thank you!
linaerys on November 11th, 2007 05:43 pm (UTC)
That was so hot I could DIE. THANK YOU!!!
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on December 5th, 2007 09:27 am (UTC)
Wow, thank you!
Amalthiaamothea on November 12th, 2007 09:59 pm (UTC)
This was very hot! :)
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on December 5th, 2007 09:27 am (UTC)
Thank you :)
Michelleccmom on January 3rd, 2008 05:12 am (UTC)
Yes, this was...hm....words are failing me, again! Hot Hot Hot omg!brain melted. Hot. Loved it! Thank you.
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on February 22nd, 2008 12:09 am (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks :)
wanted_a_pony on January 3rd, 2008 08:08 pm (UTC)
Oh. My. Sweet....

May I worship you now? Thou art God/dess of Hot & I aspire to be an unworthy acolyte. ::offers you flowers & warm butterscotch sauce & erotic jewelry::

(not all at the same time, silly ;-)


If you write more of this story you will single-handedly lower the heating bills in the entire Northern Hemisphere, & possibly increase the birthrate. Incredible & believable--thanks for writing & sharing!
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on February 22nd, 2008 01:17 am (UTC)
Wow. Thank you so much! It's not often that someone offers to worship me ;)

When I saw the prompt of Porn Star rivals I just couldn't resist :)
Raiiningraiining on February 21st, 2008 11:20 pm (UTC)
*Oh!*

Excellent. Wow. I MISSED these guys! I loved the end with the playful pushing and the instant connection. Great job with John having to botom, wonderful tension.


Good! So good!
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on February 22nd, 2008 01:17 am (UTC)
Thank you very much :)
sgakaz: bootsgakaz on March 15th, 2008 12:45 am (UTC)
Totally hot and sexy as hell, truly the mistress of porn.
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on March 29th, 2008 08:10 am (UTC)
Wow. Thank you very much!
there's nobody here but us chickensincidental_fire on June 9th, 2008 07:13 pm (UTC)
Nnnrgh. This is *really* damn hot! I love that Rodney is the only one John loses control with, and that he can trust Rodney enough to be truly comfortably with bottoming. Mostly, though, I love just how damn hot it was. ::fans self::
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on April 25th, 2009 03:15 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much. I just love the idea of Rodney coming into John's life and changing everything. Whether that's while he's sitting in a magical chair in Antarctica or shooting a porn movie :)
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Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on April 25th, 2009 03:15 pm (UTC)
Thank you!