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31 October 2007 @ 10:36 pm
Challenge Fic: Contractual Obligations. John/Rodney. NC-17.  
Title: Contractual Obligations
Author: velocitygrass
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Kissing after rimming.
Summary: "Get a condom for Rodney and something to prepare John," he heard the director's voice coming from somewhere. He slowly looked up and it suddenly dawned on him what that meant.
Note: Written for the bottom_john Rivals Challenge, specifically the Porn Star Rivals idea. For some reason this turned out less Rivals and more Rodney rescues John from his plight Harlequin. Only with more sex. Many thanks to neevebrody for doing latest minute beta duties. I don't deserve you.

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mithreon on November 1st, 2007 05:36 am (UTC)
Wonderful! Sweet and scorchingly hot at the same time. I really love this!
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:22 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you did. Hot and sweet is always a good combo :)

Thank you!
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Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:23 pm (UTC)
Hehe, thank you!

Although now that I think about it... fanning a fire will just make it bigger, right? So that would mean more hot? *g*
Your eyes are blocking my starlightaerynvala on November 1st, 2007 09:13 am (UTC)
*giggles* that was so adorably romantic hehe I swear, there is nothing like (really well written as is the case here) slash fiction to give me warm fuzzy feelings over really hot sex. you rock :)
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:25 pm (UTC)
I'm a hopeless romantic at heart.

And if I can combine it with sex, well, that's nice, too *g*

Thanks!
yinkawills: African warrior womanyinkawills on November 1st, 2007 09:55 am (UTC)
INCREDIBLE
Im a fan of your writing in SGA which is always great.
But This.....?

(lost the ability to breathe or speak or tyyyppppe....)
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:25 pm (UTC)
Re: INCREDIBLE
Wow, thank you very much. I'm flattered and glad that you enjoyed it so much :)
crysothemis: john rodney fandomboundcrysothemis on November 1st, 2007 12:46 pm (UTC)
Okay . . . uh . . . guh.

Sorry, you broke my brain with the hot and the surprisingly sweet. I love that it's Rodney that gets to John, not the position or what they're doing.

And the end, with Rodney being a not-so-secret fan, was just perfect.
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:28 pm (UTC)
Yes, John does this all the time, but in comes Rodney and suddenly everything is different.

I had more of the Rodney being a fan in my head. Actually after a few comments the picture gets kind of scary with Rodney's DVD collection and the lifesize stand-up and John Sheppard nine and a half inches "It's as if he's right there in you" dildo... ah, but he can throw that all away, now that he has the real thing ;)

Thank you!
slashpuppyslashpuppy on November 1st, 2007 12:52 pm (UTC)
Contractual Obligations
Excellent story! I kept picking out bits to praise and comment on but there were so darn many I've just given up. The whole story kinda works for me! Well done!

Un-freaking-believably hawt!

You know we want more dontcha?

:-)
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:30 pm (UTC)
Re: Contractual Obligations
Thank you so much!

You know we want more dontcha?
They live and fuck happily ever after... there's not much more to it ;)
the chicken is your superiorlavvyan on November 1st, 2007 01:14 pm (UTC)
Oh, guh! This is seriously hot.

Also, this made me snigger:

He was John Sheppard. Porn shops all over the country had life-size displays of him.

Oh John, you big dork. ♥
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you, dear!

That's not dorky! That's his market value!

Also, there's probably one in Rodney's bedroom cupboard... *g*
Diana: McShepKiss2ladyflowdi on November 1st, 2007 01:50 pm (UTC)
Holy God. This is my bunk, I'll be lying in it. So hot, so perfectly sweet, so McShep. Thank you!
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you so very much. I'm glad to have achieved that combo *g*
Ozsaur: Last Night by Michael Breyetteozsaur on November 1st, 2007 01:56 pm (UTC)
Whew! I'm going to need a cold shower now! Love John going off too soon because of Rodney. And Rodney being so caring with John, loved his protectiveness. Sweet ending, too!
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:34 pm (UTC)
He just can't help it. Everything is so different with Rodney. And I love them caring and protective.

Thank you!
galaxy_songgalaxy_song on November 1st, 2007 03:00 pm (UTC)
yay so glad some one took up that challenge and you did it so well:)
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:35 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much!
Sara: Oooh!panisdead on November 1st, 2007 03:46 pm (UTC)
Very fun!
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:35 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
I need more fandoms like CKR needs more sexy: guhlove_jackianto on November 1st, 2007 04:12 pm (UTC)
*points to icon* *thud*
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:36 pm (UTC)
I'm always happy to kill with GUH ;)
a fox in the hen house: Rachel Lutrellaccidentalfan on November 1st, 2007 05:19 pm (UTC)
"Porn shops all over the country had life-size displays of him." Yes, but does he have his own dildo?
Hot doesn't begin to describe this. *fans self* And what perfect prequel to how they end up at GPFG.
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:38 pm (UTC)
Yes, I'm certain there are lifesize nine and a half inch dildos of John Sheppard out there. And Rodney has several and practices frequently *g*

And when I wrote this, it really was in contrast to GPFG. Poor boys, you're so much better off there.

Thank you!
Mother of Chaos, but not YOUR Motherhalf_elf_lost on November 1st, 2007 06:24 pm (UTC)
Loved it all...John, who is not as jaded and still able to be surprised, and possessive, toppy Rodney.
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:39 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
i² keep it real: John/Rodneyberlinghoff79 on November 1st, 2007 06:28 pm (UTC)
You! You always make my brain -among other things- explode with your hot porn. Damn you. Can't think!

*bows before the Queen of Porn* Trust me, that's what you are. I've read truck loads of porn and you never, NEVER disappoint.
Velocitygrassvelocitygrass on November 3rd, 2007 02:42 pm (UTC)
among other things
LOL

*bows before the Queen of Porn*
Wow, now I don't just have to live up to the virtual handcuffs, but such a title. I'll do my best *g* And the teacher fic has a really hot sex scene, I just hope it comes across I thought of it in my head. *teases*

Thank you, hon :)